I feel like you could put a little more glamour into it. Some more color or pictures!
Jillian, I'm not sure what to say. I've repeatedly given you feedback that you need to use your blog post to tell a story. Posts need to be two to three paragraphs of strong content that engage your readers. A few bulletted items does not cut it.
Your SoundCloud link does not take me to YOUR page, so I can't listen to or find your podcast.
Your Facebook link is broken and needs to be fixed.
I feel like you could put a little more glamour into it. Some more color or pictures!
ReplyDeleteJillian, I'm not sure what to say. I've repeatedly given you feedback that you need to use your blog post to tell a story. Posts need to be two to three paragraphs of strong content that engage your readers. A few bulletted items does not cut it.
ReplyDeleteYour SoundCloud link does not take me to YOUR page, so I can't listen to or find your podcast.
ReplyDeleteYour Facebook link is broken and needs to be fixed.
ReplyDelete